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Commission : Rayna Faywind by DomDozz Commission : Rayna Faywind by DomDozz

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Rayna Faywind

I'm not really used to draw backgrounds, especially buildings >_< very very hard to draw! The perspective are...urgh!
I tried to hide it by making it looks shiny at the rear part...but you can still see all the flaws clearly
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Commissioner : :iconxxsharkyxx:
Commission package :Half body
Number of characters : 1
Background : Complex

Character belong to the commissioner :)

Illuststudio, SAI and Photoshop

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Foreword: I'm a complete amateur who knows nothing about art. :3

Could've used more bloom around the lighting, it needs to portray more power. Better portrayal of motion is need, some slight gust of wind blowing specks of dust in the background might help (just simply something to really break the stillness in the background)...

Also maybe a little less symmetrical on the way her clothing are blown with the wind?

Perspective is pretty ridiculous (like you said). You have to know our brains automatically adapt our views so that the buildings in the background would look like they're straight, so it looks really odd for buildings to be seen at an angle like that. Try to keep that in mind in later works...

Overall: Good detailing, decent color scheme, but sub par impact.
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Critique by Themanwhokilledhomes Jan 30, 2013, 10:47:11 PM
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roundtower Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
* ¡Fantástico trabajo! Lo hemos destacado dentro de la carpeta "Featured nº5 o Destacados nº 5" en Special-Groups. (Es la carpeta donde se exhiben los mejores trabajos del grupo).
¡Por favor, queremos ver más trabajos tuyos en el grupo!. 

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* Fantastic work! Featured in Special-Groups in folder Featured nº 5. (Best works of the group). 
Please, We want to see more works in the group of you!. 
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ooh, thank you very much! I appreciate it! ^^
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roundtower Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
  A real pleasure dear friend Adimas! Merry Christmas for you! 5 seconds hug :merry christmas: Snowy :secretsanta: Merry Christmas Sign  Snowman and Snow: 1
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Merry Christmas for you too Nuria! :D I hope you'll have a wonderful celebration and holiday! :D
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Saya-chan98 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AAwsomw *^*
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wah, thank you so much! XD
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Saya-chan98 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome XDD!! *^*
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SimplySilent Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
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:dummy: Your artwork has been featured in my journal here: [link]! :deviation:

Have a wonderful day! :giggle:
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow! Thank you so much for the feature!
I really appreciate it! XD
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SimplySilent Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
You're welcome~ And it was my pleasure :D
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