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Commission : Rayna Faywind by DomDozz Commission : Rayna Faywind by DomDozz

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Rayna Faywind

I'm not really used to draw backgrounds, especially buildings >_< very very hard to draw! The perspective are...urgh!
I tried to hide it by making it looks shiny at the rear part...but you can still see all the flaws clearly
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Commissioner : :iconxxsharkyxx:
Commission package :Half body
Number of characters : 1
Background : Complex

Character belong to the commissioner :)

Illuststudio, SAI and Photoshop

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:iconmark009vn:
Foreword: I'm a complete amateur who knows nothing about art. :3

Could've used more bloom around the lighting, it needs to portray more power. Better portrayal of motion is need, some slight gust of wind blowing specks of dust in the background might help (just simply something to really break the stillness in the background)...

Also maybe a little less symmetrical on the way her clothing are blown with the wind?

Perspective is pretty ridiculous (like you said). You have to know our brains automatically adapt our views so that the buildings in the background would look like they're straight, so it looks really odd for buildings to be seen at an angle like that. Try to keep that in mind in later works...

Overall: Good detailing, decent color scheme, but sub par impact.
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Critique by Themanwhokilledhomes Jan 30, 2013, 10:47:11 PM
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roundtower Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
* ¡Fantástico trabajo! Lo hemos destacado dentro de la carpeta "Featured nº5 o Destacados nº 5" en Special-Groups. (Es la carpeta donde se exhiben los mejores trabajos del grupo).
¡Por favor, queremos ver más trabajos tuyos en el grupo!. 

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* Fantastic work! Featured in Special-Groups in folder Featured nº 5. (Best works of the group). 
Please, We want to see more works in the group of you!. 
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ooh, thank you very much! I appreciate it! ^^
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roundtower Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
  A real pleasure dear friend Adimas! Merry Christmas for you! 5 seconds hug :merry christmas: Snowy :secretsanta: Merry Christmas Sign  Snowman and Snow: 1
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Merry Christmas for you too Nuria! :D I hope you'll have a wonderful celebration and holiday! :D
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Saya-chan98 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AAwsomw *^*
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wah, thank you so much! XD
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Saya-chan98 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome XDD!! *^*
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SimplySilent Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
:iconhello1plz::iconhello2plz:
:dummy: Your artwork has been featured in my journal here: [link]! :deviation:

Have a wonderful day! :giggle:
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:icondomdozz:
DomDozz Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow! Thank you so much for the feature!
I really appreciate it! XD
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SimplySilent Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
You're welcome~ And it was my pleasure :D
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ShamelessMagic Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Filmographer
I absolutely love this! The detail and effects are incredibly amazing, and the lighting really suits it well without going blindingly bright. Your perspective is also really good!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow thank you very much for your compliment! XD
Hehehe, though i think it's not the best piece XD
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caynansantos Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
very nice !!!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! :D
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XxSharkyxX Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
DomDozz did an amazing job on this piece. He worked closely with me to make sure that it was exactly the way I visioned it to look. Thanks for being patient with my request man! I look forward to working with you on another piece in the future!
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:icondomdozz:
DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much, Chad!
It was really fun drawing Rayna ^^ and i'm glad that you like the result!
Looking forward to create another work with you too XD
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Webkidbelle Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student General Artist
OMG! This is super awesome! This looks like it belongs on a manga comic cover!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow thank you so much! XD I wish it is hahaha
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Spirit-of-Wolves Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
such cool affects!!!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much! :D
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Enoa79 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Beautiful work. Very well done.
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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Enoa79 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
You're welcome.
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:iconfibisugar:
fibisugar Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
FREAKIN BEAUTIFUL OMG!!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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MizuuHime Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student General Artist
This is a nice and awesome-ly drawn picture! I am kinda impressed with how you draw building, especially if you aren't used to make them. The details looks awesome, and the perspective is pretty good.

But, there is just some suggestion, that I notice that you may can improve later on :) I think, it is better to make the background slightly darker, especially the building, so the lightning magic, can be standing out more. I think just that. :)
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow, Thank you very much! ^^

Ohh, i agree with your suggestion :D the dark background can make the character stand out more :D
I was confused whether to do it dark or bright before XD maybe i'll try to make a darker background next time to see how it'll become :D

I appreciate your comment! :w00t:
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MizuuHime Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Yes, it might be better to see how it goes with dark background, later on ^^

You are welcome ^^ Keep making awesome art :)
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yay! :w00t:
Thank you very much!
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MizuuHime Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student General Artist
You are welcome :)
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XxAmaterasu-chanxX Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it looks soo kewlll
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LaWeyD Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this looks seriously awesome!!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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LaWeyD Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob :D
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jagg17 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What flaws?? I see no flaws. Everything looks amazing~!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
The buildings XD if you stretch them further, they'll collide, it wasn't supposed to be like that haha XD
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blanket86 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so amazing! Very interesting work!
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:icondomdozz:
DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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Faithful-Imagination Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
WOW!!! SO COOL!!! GREAT DETAIL!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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Faithful-Imagination Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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CodyNaomiSwire Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! Nice work with the special effects!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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Blasian-Parkour Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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MarcellenNeppel Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, that impressive art! Well done!!
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^
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Otaku-tom Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
I love her the rob colours
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! ^^ Me too, hehe
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RandomPerson1310 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
No idea who this is, but it looks beautiful!
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